Just to get a feel fro submitting to a writing contest, I put together a quick story a couple of months ago and submitted it to the Misfits Writing Contest.
There is a bit of an influence of Corey Doctrow in here, as I had just finished reading Little Brother. That said, I would not say that it is fanfic by any means.
I would direct you to the http://www.misfit.org web site for more information on Misfits as an organization, as well as additional information on the writing contest. The feedback I personally received at the 2009 CONvergence convention was that every submission that was received this year was of substantially higher quality than much of the material they have received in the past. I believe it was an effort to say that while what I wrote was very good in their eyes, they did receive even higher quality writing that went forward and ended up winning the contest. I also gather that the top 5 entries in each catagory were all agreed to by the judges, thought there may have been some disagreement on the order.
I tend to limit myself to short fiction. There is a fair amount of writing formats that I do not do well. As an example I know that I Need to do a lot of work on Dialog, as well as character development. Dialog can help the story move along very well. I would have to say that most of my writing at this point is more narrative than anything else. As a result it often will feel that someone sat down and ‘gave testimony’ when reading my writing. That said, I will try to write to a wider variety of styles in the future. I shan’t be submitting novels by any means. I don’t expect the judges to consider such worthy of inclusion. Their time is limited, and should be devoted to being able to review and consider each contestant’s writing.
If you happen to like my writing, or story telling, I would have to suggest finding a copy of the Misfits Writing Contest book, and read some of the other writing as well. I am a poor judge of my own writing. I have been told to continue, and to submit further pieces. I know I will do the former, and I’m hoping to do the latter as well.
If you are interested in a completely separate piece, and I’m not really happy with the ending of it, so I may re-write it in the future, I have published here as well, http://www.beresourceful.net/~rusty/blog/2008/10/short-story-time/
Both stories can be considered a bit dark, though I hope you will find humor in them as well.
I know people who have worked for The Department of Homeland Security. I’m pretty sure that if they wished to they could poke holes in this story that you could pilot the Queen Mary through. I do not hate what they stand for, though I don’t always agree with everything they have done so far, and strongly disagree with some of their policies and recommendations. That said, the people of the USA as a group as well as as represented by or representatives and senators, has elected to effectively eliminate certain ‘rights’ that some consider as included in the Declaration, the Constitution and the bill of rights. Whether you agree with those people or not, we will be experiencing issues for some time to come that we can point directly at those decisions, and recognize that what we ended up with was the logical outcome.
Without further foreshadowing, or other writing…